30 July 2010, 9:46 am
I'm writing a story and a girl gets in a really bad car accident. She is sideswiped by a semi in an intersection and rolled into the side of a light post/concrete thing but the semi stops before he smashes her while rolling to the post. Look at this address on Google maps. E 2230 N/N Canyon Road Provo Utah 84604. (This book really takes place in Boston but this is by my cousins house.) And its the concrete "wall" next to the brown apartment building. Shes driving a white Toyota Corolla 2005. What i already have is she ends up upside down(With her seat belt on) and the regular people can't get her out so the ambulance comes and gets her out. But I need some really legitimate injury's to have her stay in the ICU for a week or so. I have that she broke a rib and punctured her lung (Left) But the need to cut her open like trying to fix an organ? Not sure which or if its some internal bleeding they have to fix. Shes going to be unconscious so I'll be writing from the doctors perspective. Any Suggestions are appreciated. Thanks!... Read More »